Reconnect Before Writing Your College Essay

Terry Chevako Bava • August 3, 2020
For many seniors, the beginning of August means that summer is drawing to a close and the start of the new school year—however it will look—is upon them. It also means that the college application season is about to hit with full force. A big part of the application is the all-important essay.
For most students, the first big essay is requested by the Common Application. The six prompts are designed to elicit a 650-word response that offers insight into the student’s personality, background, ideals and motivations. The essay should give the college admissions reader an idea of what the person might be like as student on their campus.

In the age of Covid-19, it might be a challenge to focus on something other than this virus and how it has upended our lives, but that is exactly what I urge you to do. I do understand the difficulty. I’ve spent the last six months home-bound, my son canceled his summer visit, and the governor won’t let me snorkel. I get it! But the last six months are just a part of your high school experience and your formation as a student, and frankly, everyone across the country has experienced Covid-19 in one fashion or another.

The Common App this year offers an optional essay where you can describe your pandemic experience. It gives you 250 words that all the colleges you apply to will see. In that essay, you can describe the academic, emotional or personal toll exacted by the virus—and then move on. Numerous college admission officials have made it clear in webinars this summer that while they welcome clarification of how Covid-19 has affected students, they don’t want that to be the whole story.
One way to disconnect from Covid is to reconnect with the activities you love, even if it’s in a different way. I am passionate about snorkeling but have been in the water only a couple of times this year, and it’s not looking good for the rest of the summer. Instead of brooding over that, I decided to browse through my hundreds (thousands?) of underwater photos to choose a dozen of my most spectacular shots for a calendar to give as gifts this year. After all, window shopping is not likely to be on my agenda! It was incredibly soothing to revisit favorite shots such as of an octopus in full Superman mode, a rather large barracuda getting overly friendly, and a joyful conga line of cuttlefish. If I were applying to college, this would surely be more interesting and enlightening to a college official than how much I miss going out to restaurants.

As I charged my battery backups ahead of Tropical Storm Isaias’s arrival, I charged my regular camera battery as well. Since I couldn’t head out to my old favorites of school plays and musical concerts, I hit the backyard instead. I found it immensely soothing to assess the lighting through my lens, consider the juxtaposition of flowers, leaves and weeds (I need to get on that!) and click away. I stalked a lizard for a good fifteen minutes before I got the shot I wanted. It was thrilling to later download the photos and sort through them, discarding the ones that didn’t work and thinking about how to reframe the shots next time. A lot goes into deciding which of thirty lizard shots will grace my blog post!

My time reconnecting with my pre-Covid self was energizing! You might try the same so that you are ready to write meaningfully about who you are and what matters to you. And I’m not saying you have reread The Odyssey! If you ordered Disney+ so you could watch Hamilton every day for a month, great! Watch it one more time and think about why it matters to you so much. Do you find yourself critiquing the choreography or listening for lines to use when Model UN competitions resume? Maybe you know what the AOL octave has to do with the show and are thinking about how to incorporate that sort of thinking into your own work. Whatever you spend time on, think about how the parts that you enjoy connect to other parts of your life. You may well see a theme develop.

Spend a little time reconnecting with what you love and making connections, and it will help you to write a powerful essay about who you are and what matters to you.

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By Terry Chevako Bava April 7, 2021
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By Terry Chevako Bava November 10, 2020
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